A compilation of information about Solresol, the universal musical language

Script (Practice #1)

Projects using Solresol. Issues in translation may be discussed, but issues inherent to the language should be taken to one of the Linguistic Discussion forums.
Dofa rere dosolsolla mire sidomi famisol misidofa fa faremi resisido dolasisol solsifasi.

Mimisimi lala fasire mido siredola mimifala/midodosol/miredodo.

[It has been confirmed that the enemy has what seems to be a futuristic oil rig.

Now investigating for further detail.]

What do you think? What it a grammatical error? Any word that does not feel right?
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